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Re: Desmond Carter
Very much to the final sentence. On the note of brevity, the dialogue would be more apt were it more distinguishable by character. Idiotmatic for the girl, at least--which it ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: What Are YOU Reading?
The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle Haruki Murakami The Confessions St. Augustine To The Lighthouse Virginia Woolf Murakami may be vaguely insane. Or perhaps tis merely an uncanny knack for splitting into ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: What Are YOU Reading?
Hard-boiled Wonderland and the End of the World by Haruki Murakami. IMP
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: 026. Siamo Anziani
Oy, I very much agree that it is threadbare, even while I think there's a certain amount of brevity that gives it its voice. How do you think it could ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: 026. Siamo Anziani
Siamo Anziani [ We Are Old ] 026. lurk Note: It seems terribly short. Written in as little time as its length might hint. Oy, but to expand felt to ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Eternal Rome. 01.
Hullo O Sinister Jigster. ^_^ Turnabout's fair-play, da? though in this case 'tis positive, rather the eye for an eye sort; a thanks for the remarks on mine. Anyhow, I ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: YWS Members Quiz Questions and Answers
Er, devil's minion? o_0 Ah, poor imp... IMP
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Words With Which We Say, Goodbye -Edited-
Run-Through--[At a Runner's Sprint Pace] Oy, detail at the beginning was apt. I immediately got a tangible sense of both the mother's and daughter's character--and by that, a sense of ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: 04. Dumayu...
Dumayu B'il Mal'enkiy 04. Tokyo Note: In all honesty, this is a ragged wreck--it goes all whichways. An experiment, yes. But I rather think it needs a lot of fine-tuning ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Words With Which We Say, Goodbye -Edited-
Oy, there are some brilliant layers here. ^_^ I'll be back. But only as a brief note - The only aspect in a skimming of it that brought my mind ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: 016. No Know Now
No Know Now 016. prayer for CL's Sentient City Note: It is written in ten minutes, and no doubt representative of the rush. But NaNo needed breaking from for a ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: What's your NaNo '08 about?
Times Done NaNo: 3 NaNo Title: Tramezzo [ or Glibly, Wayfarer ] Genre: The one that fits, da? or none. Plot: The monkey chased the weasel [ and protons chase ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Post your first NaNoWriMo sentence!
Oy, I am writing inside-out. If the beginning sentence is the last it's more likely than that it's the first; though dropping in the middle--better odds of that. Ah well. ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Vetren'iy, 1.1 - Rare Word, Refuge
'Lo CL--I can't believe I haven't thanked you for this yet. ^_^ Anyhow, thanks very much... And perhaps I'll have another few installments by Christmas Break. Oy, I would much ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Dreaming Deep?
Oy, I'll be looking out for it. ^_^ IMP
Oct 21, 2008
